It’s a nice comparison between the two editors. If you’re looking for feedback, though, the computer generated voice brings the quality down and can be somewhat distracting. I know that when I was doing a YouTube search to compare editors on my own a few months ago, I would have clicked this one away because of the machine-generated voice. I want a human connection when I look at an editorial video like this.
The music fits well in the mix, but I might pick something with a different mood. That’s just a personal decision, though.