That looks cool. Regarding the audio, search for vintage or mythological background music. That will make a sense with the video, regarding the site, it doesn’t matter, choose the song you like.
Don’t choose those overedited sound effects and bg, they sound really old and bad.
One more thing, you can hire a voiceover artist to say those big bold words like “7000 Years ago”. That will sound really cool.
Yes, nice comic-style fairytail video I agree with TimLau - had difficulties to read the bubbles as well. Look for a bigger and more fantasy-like font I would replace them with voice over if possible.
Indian ambient background music sounds great for that scenery
@TimLau & @RilosVideos - Thank you for taking the time out to view the video and giving your feedback
I created the whole project on my desktop, didn’t realize it would cause problems on the smaller screen.
I researched a lot of comics and all of them used the same font that I have used - do you think increasing the font size would help? Presently the font size is 12 - should I increase it to 14 or 16?
Please let me know.
Thank you once again for your precious feedback - much appreciated
Larger font size will help, but this font not very legible and is not made for to be easy to read, it has problems with spaces between the letter, it might work with printed comics, where you have more time to read the text, but is not good of this kind of video format, if you want the audience to read the text
I have uploaded the final version (with music) on Archive.org - because YT is infamous for deleting content without reason.
I will start working on the fonts, will send you a sample before replacing the font in the whole series, your feedback is highly appreciated. thank you so much