I think it needs to lose a couple of minutes.
Using so many dissolves does not convey the excitement of the display (I would have used cuts).
Include reaction shots of yourself (if your a good actor).
Pity it was such an overcast day.
I think it needs to lose a couple of minutes.
Using so many dissolves does not convey the excitement of the display (I would have used cuts).
Include reaction shots of yourself (if your a good actor).
Pity it was such an overcast day.